Grade 7 · English Language Arts and Reading

Describe how the author's use of figurative language such as metaphor and personification achieves specific purposes

Quarter 3 · Week 5 · TEKS

Standards Alignment

  • TEKS.110.23.09D primary
    describe how the author's use of figurative language such as metaphor and personification achieves specific purposes;
  • TEKS.110.23.09E primary
    identify the use of literary devices, including subjective and objective point of view;
  • TEKS.110.23.09F primary
    analyze how the author's use of language contributes to mood, voice, and tone; and

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Lesson Overview

This lesson helps Grade 7 students analyze how authors use figurative language, specifically metaphor and personification, to achieve specific purposes in texts. Students will also identify literary devices including subjective and objective points of view, and analyze how language choices contribute to mood, voice, and tone. The lesson aligns with TEKS standards and supports students in developing critical inquiry skills to understand and apply author's craft.

Learning Objectives

  • Describe how an author’s use of metaphor and personification achieves specific purposes in a text.
  • Identify literary devices such as subjective and objective points of view within texts.
  • Analyze how an author’s language choices influence mood, voice, and tone in a text.

Success Criteria

  • I can explain what a metaphor and personification are and find examples in a text.
  • I can identify when a text shows subjective or objective point of view.
  • I can describe how the author’s language affects the mood, voice, or tone of a story or poem.

Prerequisite Knowledge

Students should understand basic literary terms such as simile, metaphor, and personification, and have experience reading and discussing grade-level texts. They should be familiar with the concept of point of view and mood in literature.

Key Vocabulary

  • Figurative language
  • Metaphor
  • Personification
  • Literary devices
  • Subjective point of view
  • Objective point of view
  • Mood
  • Voice
  • Tone

Materials and Resources

  • Copies of short texts or excerpts containing metaphors and personification (poems, short stories, or paragraphs)
  • Chart paper or whiteboard for listing examples
  • Graphic organizer for figurative language analysis
  • Writing journals or notebooks
  • Markers or pens

Teacher Preparation

  • Select mentor texts that clearly demonstrate metaphor and personification with purposeful effects.
  • Prepare a chart or slide defining key vocabulary with examples.
  • Prepare guided questions to prompt student thinking about author’s purpose and language effects.
  • Create or print graphic organizers for students to record observations about figurative language and literary devices.

Detailed Lesson Notes

Figurative Language: Definitions and Purpose

Figurative language uses words or expressions with meanings different from the literal interpretation to create vivid imagery or express ideas in imaginative ways. Two common types are metaphor and personification. A metaphor directly compares two unlike things by stating one is the other, helping readers understand a concept by linking it to something familiar. Personification gives human qualities to non-human things, making descriptions more relatable and vivid. Authors use these devices to deepen meaning, evoke emotions, or highlight themes.

Metaphor: How It Works and Why Authors Use It

A metaphor states that one thing is another to suggest a likeness or shared quality. For example, saying "Time is a thief" suggests time steals moments from our lives. This device helps readers see abstract ideas concretely and can create strong emotional effects. Authors use metaphors to emphasize particular ideas or feelings, making their message more memorable and impactful.

Personification: Bringing Non-Human Things to Life

Personification attributes human traits, emotions, or actions to animals, objects, or ideas. For example, "The wind whispered through the trees" gives the wind the human action of whispering. This makes descriptions more engaging and helps readers connect emotionally with the text. Authors use personification to create mood, highlight themes, or add voice and tone to their writing.

Subjective vs. Objective Point of View

Subjective point of view presents the narrator’s personal feelings, thoughts, or opinions, which can influence how events or characters are described. Objective point of view presents facts without personal bias or emotion. Recognizing these helps readers understand the author’s perspective and how it shapes the meaning and tone of the text.

Mood, Voice, and Tone: Language’s Emotional Impact

Mood is the feeling or atmosphere a text creates for the reader, such as suspenseful, joyful, or gloomy. Voice is the author’s unique style or personality expressed through writing. Tone is the author’s attitude toward the subject or audience, such as serious, sarcastic, or hopeful. Authors use language choices—including figurative language and point of view—to shape mood, voice, and tone, influencing how readers experience the text.

Worked Examples

Worked Example 1

Scenario

Read the sentence: "The classroom was a zoo." What type of figurative language is this, and what purpose does it serve?

Explanation

This sentence uses a metaphor by directly comparing the classroom to a zoo. The author likely wants to show that the classroom was noisy or chaotic, helping the reader picture the scene vividly.

Answer Guide

It is a metaphor that compares the classroom to a zoo to show it was noisy or wild.

Worked Example 2

Scenario

In the phrase "The angry storm pounded on the windows," what figurative language is used and why?

Explanation

This is personification because the storm is given the human quality of anger and the action of pounding. This helps create a mood of intensity and danger.

Answer Guide

Personification is used to give the storm human qualities, making the scene feel intense and threatening.

Engage

Teacher Activity

Introduce the lesson by reading aloud a short poem or passage that uses metaphor and personification. Ask students to listen carefully and think about what images or feelings the author creates.

Student Activity

Listen attentively to the reading. Share initial thoughts or feelings about the imagery or mood created by the author’s words.

Explanation

This activity draws students’ attention to figurative language and its effects, preparing them to analyze how these devices achieve specific purposes.

Examples

  • Students notice vivid or imaginative descriptions.
  • Students recognize comparisons or human-like qualities given to non-human things.
  • Students express emotional responses to the text.

Explore

Teacher Activity

Provide students with short excerpts containing metaphors and personification. Guide them in identifying examples and discussing what each figurative device means and why the author might have used it.

Student Activity

Work individually or in pairs to find metaphors and personification in the texts. Discuss the possible purpose or effect of each example.

Explanation

This phase helps students practice identifying figurative language and begin to interpret its purpose in context.

Examples

  • Students correctly identify metaphors and personification.
  • Students explain the meaning or effect of the figurative language.
  • Students connect the devices to the author’s purpose or mood.

Explain

Teacher Activity

Define and explain metaphor and personification clearly. Discuss subjective and objective points of view and how language affects mood, voice, and tone. Use examples from the texts explored.

Student Activity

Take notes on definitions and examples. Ask questions to clarify understanding. Participate in discussion about how language shapes meaning and mood.

Explanation

This phase solidifies understanding of key concepts and terminology, linking figurative language to author’s craft and purpose.

Examples

  • Students can articulate definitions of metaphor and personification.
  • Students understand subjective vs. objective point of view.
  • Students recognize how language choices influence mood and tone.

Elaborate

Teacher Activity

Have students write a short paragraph or poem using metaphor and personification to create a specific mood or tone. Encourage them to think about the purpose behind their language choices.

Student Activity

Compose original writing that includes at least one metaphor and one example of personification. Share writing with peers and explain the intended effect.

Explanation

This phase allows students to apply their understanding creatively and purposefully, reinforcing how authors use figurative language to achieve specific purposes.

Examples

  • Students produce writing with clear use of metaphor and personification.
  • Students explain how their language choices create mood or tone.
  • Students demonstrate purposeful use of figurative language.

Evaluate

Teacher Activity

Ask students to read a new short passage and identify examples of metaphor, personification, and point of view. Then, have them explain how these elements contribute to the mood, voice, or tone of the passage.

Student Activity

Analyze the passage independently or in small groups. Write or discuss responses explaining the author’s use of figurative language and its effects.

Explanation

This assessment phase checks students’ ability to identify and analyze figurative language and literary devices in new contexts, demonstrating mastery of the lesson objectives.

Examples

  • Students accurately identify figurative language and point of view.
  • Students explain the author’s purpose in using these devices.
  • Students connect language use to mood, voice, or tone.

Classroom Activity

Work individually or in pairs to find metaphors and personification in the texts. Discuss the possible purpose or effect of each example.

Guided Practice

Guided Practice 1

Prompt

What is a metaphor?

Teacher Answer Guide

A metaphor is a figure of speech that directly compares two unlike things by saying one is the other.

Guided Practice 2

Prompt

Identify the personification in: "The leaves danced in the wind."

Teacher Answer Guide

The leaves are personified because they are described as dancing, a human action.

Guided Practice 3

Prompt

Explain the metaphor "Time is a thief."

Teacher Answer Guide

It means time takes away moments from life like a thief steals things, showing the importance of valuing time.

Guided Practice 4

Prompt

How does subjective point of view influence tone?

Teacher Answer Guide

It includes the narrator’s feelings and opinions, creating a personal or emotional tone.

Guided Practice 5

Prompt

How do metaphor and personification work together in a passage?

Teacher Answer Guide

They create vivid images and emotions that build mood and support the author’s purpose.

Independent Practice

  1. Foundational: What is a metaphor? Give a simple example.
  2. Developing: Identify the personification in this sentence: "The leaves danced in the wind."
  3. Application: Explain how the metaphor "Time is a thief" helps the reader understand the author’s purpose.
  4. Analysis: How does an author’s use of subjective point of view influence the tone of a story?
  5. Challenge: Analyze a passage where both metaphor and personification are used. Describe how these devices work together to create mood and support the author’s purpose.

Independent Practice Teacher Answer Key

  1. 1. A metaphor is a figure of speech that directly compares two unlike things by saying one is the other. Example: "The sun is a golden ball."
  2. 2. The leaves are personified because they are described as dancing, which is a human action.
  3. 3. The metaphor suggests that time takes away moments from life like a thief steals things, helping the reader feel the importance of valuing time.
  4. 4. A subjective point of view includes the narrator’s feelings and opinions, which can create a personal, emotional, or biased tone that shapes how the story is perceived.
  5. 5. In a passage where metaphor compares a storm to an angry beast and personification describes the wind as howling in pain, these devices combine to create a mood of fear and chaos, emphasizing the power of nature and supporting the author’s purpose to evoke tension.

Guiding Questions

  • How does the author’s use of metaphor help you understand the text?
  • What effect does personification have on the mood or tone?
  • How can you tell if a point of view is subjective or objective?
  • In what ways does the author’s language shape the voice of the text?
  • Why do you think the author chose these particular figurative devices?

Common Misconceptions

  • Metaphors are not just fancy similes; they do not use "like" or "as" but state one thing is another.
  • Personification does not mean objects literally have human feelings; it is a way to make descriptions more vivid.
  • Subjective point of view is not the same as lying; it reflects personal perspective and feelings.
  • Mood is not the same as tone; mood is the feeling the reader gets, tone is the author’s attitude.

Differentiation

Support and Intervention

Provide sentence frames to help students explain figurative language. Use graphic organizers to visually separate examples of metaphor and personification. Allow students to work in pairs to discuss and identify literary devices.

English-Language Learner Support

Use visuals and gestures to explain figurative language terms. Provide bilingual dictionaries or word banks with key vocabulary. Model sentence structures for describing author’s purpose and mood.

Advanced and Extension

Challenge students to find multiple examples of figurative language in a longer text. Encourage students to compare how different authors use metaphor and personification. Have students write an analysis paragraph explaining how figurative language shapes tone and mood.

Assessment

  • Students identify metaphors and personification in short texts and explain their effects.
  • Students discuss subjective and objective points of view and how they influence meaning.
  • Students write original sentences or paragraphs using figurative language purposefully.
  • Identify one metaphor and one example of personification from today’s reading and explain their purpose.
  • Describe how the author’s language affected the mood of the passage you read.
  • Write an essay analyzing how an author uses figurative language and point of view to create mood and tone in a selected text.

Answer Guide

  • What is a metaphor?
    Answer: A metaphor is a figure of speech that directly compares two unlike things by saying one is the other.
  • Identify the personification in: "The leaves danced in the wind."
    Answer: The leaves are personified because they are described as dancing, a human action.
  • Explain the metaphor "Time is a thief."
    Answer: It means time takes away moments from life like a thief steals things, showing the importance of valuing time.
  • How does subjective point of view influence tone?
    Answer: It includes the narrator’s feelings and opinions, creating a personal or emotional tone.
  • How do metaphor and personification work together in a passage?
    Answer: They create vivid images and emotions that build mood and support the author’s purpose.

Real-Life Application

Encourage students to find examples of metaphor and personification in books or media at home and discuss with family how these devices affect the story or message.

Homework or Home Connection

  • Encourage students to find examples of metaphor and personification in books or media at home and discuss with family how these devices affect the story or message.

Lesson Summary

In this lesson, students learned to identify and explain how authors use metaphor and personification to achieve specific purposes in texts. They also explored how literary devices like subjective and objective point of view influence meaning, and how language choices shape mood, voice, and tone. Through reading, discussion, and writing, students developed skills to analyze and apply author’s craft in their own work.

Teacher Notes

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